What do you think of the opening page of my story ?

i really like this! i think it would e a really cool book. Your a very good writter. If you keep it up i think u could probably get this published. I don't really see how's it's bad to switch tenses. I know alot of book that do the same. Im a book junkie kinda sorta i guess? i read alot, but then again it's only sometimes. I think you should finish this story, it seems very interesting. Godd luck! Blessings!